Kamis, 23 April 2015
Nyonya Meneer
Nyonya Meneer is of Chinese descent who was born in Sidoarjo
in 1895. She was born as Lauw Ping Nio. Its name is derived from the name of Menir
rice . Due to the influence of the Dutch language, the word Menir finally
written into " Meneer ".
Nyonya Meneer has a husband who came from Surabaya named Ong Bian Wan . After marriage they moved
to Semarang, Central Java. At the beginning of the 20th century, Nyonya
Meneer husband fell ill. Nyonya Meneer then make a jamu, and is able to recover her beloved husband.
Slowly but surely , jamu has become a
popular and spread to other cities around Semarang.
Finally , in 1919, his family supports the
establishment of a business called " Jamu Cap Potret Nyonya Meneer" in Semarang and continues to grow. Jamu Nyonya Meneer start reaching the market in Jakarta in 1940.
Entering 1970, the competition in the jamu industry starting tight. Two companies that are competitors for Jamu Nyonya Meneer are PT. Sido Muncul and PT. Air Mancur.
Nyonya Meneer died in 1978. Operational of the company
then forwarded by the third generation of Nyonya Meneer.
On January 18, 1984 , established Museum Jamu Nyonya Meneer in Semarang who became the first jamu museum in Indonesia. This museum save various collections of cultural objects of jamu and private collections such as the history of Nyonya Meneer way of making jamu by using traditional tools, such as lumpang, alu, pepesan, cuwo, panel, and bothekan.
Now, PT. Nyonya Meneer become a national icon jamu industry in Indonesia is the largest and oldest. The company has also expanded into the international market by exporting to several countries. In 2006, PT Nyonya Meneer successfully market to Taiwan after successfully entering Malaysia, Brunei, Singapore, Australia, Netherlands, Saudi Arabia and United States.
I'm sorry,I will give you feedback in your work #4,,,, :v
BalasHapus-Nyonya Meneer is “of” Chinese descent who was born in Sidoarjo in 1895. I think "of" in this sentence is useless.
-"Finally , in 1919 , "his" family supports the establishment of a business called ......." maybe the correct pronoun is "her".
I will give you feedback again next time.. thank you :v
I’m sorry,I will give you feedback again like I said last night.
BalasHapus- Its “name is” derived from the name of Menir rice . perhaps its useless, so you must write “Its derived from the name of Menir rice.”
- Nyonya Meneer(‘s) husband fell ill. because its possesive
- “Nyonya Meneer then make a jamu”.maybe better “Then Nyonya Meneer make(s) a jamu”
- “Entering” 1970. Maybe better “Starting”
- “In 2006 , PT Nyonya Meneer successfully market……..” I’m sorry if this is a mistake,perhaps you must write “In 2006 , PT Nyonya Meneer “was” successfully market……..” because its past.
Thank you and sorry if there are some mistakes in my correction. :v
thanks for your fedback irfan,
Hapusbut I think "entering" is the best, because I mean "memasuki" not "mulai". :D
Hi Jihan, I will give some feedbacks for you :)
Hapus1. "At the beginning of the 20th century, Nyonya Meneer husband fell ill. Nyonya Meneer then make a jamu, and is able to recover her beloved husband", should be "At the beginning of the 20th century, Nyonya Meneer husband felt ill. Nyonya Meneer then made a jamu, and it was able to recover her beloved husband." , because it happened in the past.
2. "Now, PT. Nyonya Meneer become a national icon jamu industry in Indonesia is the largest and oldest." , this sentence should be "Now, PT. Nyonya Meneer becomes a national icon jamu industry in Indonesia, it is the largest and oldest. "
Thank you, and sorry if there are some mistakes I did in my correction :)