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Posted by : irffandwi Selasa, 31 Maret 2015



I would like to say thank you to Miss Sri Utami that give me opportunity to learn more about grammar.
Perhaps I found some wrong grammar  which was used, those are :

Group 7 :         
1.      I Can’t go to party because I am studiting now (to the party because its specific purpose)
2.      Last month I was dancing with my girlfriend when my brotherS came.(brothers)

Group 9
1.      Fauzi had sent me a email before he called yesterday (the correct article is an because before
  the article is vocal characters)
2.      I known you after I had met with your family(I knew because without tobe so must V2 ; without   with because it is useless)
3.      I drive a motorcycle  to go to the office but  now I go to there by taxi (without to)

Group 10
1.     Networking is very important for our organization, so we have to have many relation with other     company.(relations because before “ relation” is many)
2.     I had finished wrap up this candy two hours ago, so you can bring it to the warehouse.(perhaps,finished is useless,because after it is verb too,so the correct sentence is I had wrapped)
3.      Novi had written her job to makes some business plan, she must bring it to the director tommorow morning as soon as possible.(I think this is typo,the correct is tomorrow)

Thank you :) :v



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  1. hi ,fan..
    Your work has done well..
    just simple comment from me, In your sentence :"... thank you to Miss Sri Utami that give me opportunity..", i think it should be :"... thank you to Miss Sri Utami that GIVES me opportunity.." because the subject is singular.
    Thank you~

    BalasHapus

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