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Posted by : irffandwi
Selasa, 31 Maret 2015
I would like to say thank you to Miss
Sri Utami that give me opportunity to learn more about grammar.
Perhaps I found some wrong grammar which was used, those are :
Perhaps I found some wrong grammar which was used, those are :
Group 7 :
1. I Can’t go to party because I am
studiting now (to
the party because its
specific purpose)
2.
Last month I was dancing with my girlfriend when my brotherS came.(brothers)
Group 9
1.
Fauzi had sent me a email before he called yesterday (the correct article is an because before
the article is vocal characters)
the article is vocal characters)
2.
I known you after I had met with your family(I knew because without tobe so must V2 ; without with because it is useless)
3.
I drive a motorcycle
to go to the office but now I go to there by taxi
(without to)
Group 10
1. Networking is very important for our organization, so we
have to have many relation with
other company.(relations because before “ relation” is many)
2. I had finished wrap up this candy two hours
ago, so you can bring it to the warehouse.(perhaps,finished is
useless,because after it is verb too,so the correct sentence is I had wrapped)
3.
Novi had written her job to makes some business plan, she
must bring it to the director tommorow morning as soon as
possible.(I think this is typo,the correct is tomorrow)
Thank you :) :v
Dear Irfan. very good! :)
BalasHapushi ,fan..
BalasHapusYour work has done well..
just simple comment from me, In your sentence :"... thank you to Miss Sri Utami that give me opportunity..", i think it should be :"... thank you to Miss Sri Utami that GIVES me opportunity.." because the subject is singular.
Thank you~