Kamis, 02 April 2015
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here, I try to find grammatical error for work#2 from my friends, and I try to
give suggestion too. Because we are here to study English together. And I am from
group 9, say thanks for your suggestion. We hope we don’t repeat it.
So, I can see some error like this….
·
Group
7 They wrote like this...
a. She is Listening to music. [listening]
b. I had played football after I exercised.
[ I
played football after I had exercised ] so, after “after” is perfect tense,
because “exercise” had done before play.
c.
Networking is very important for our organization, so we
have to have many
relation with
other company
[ many relations] [ other companies ]
Many and other is used to “plural”
·
Group
10 They wrote like this..
a.
We are starting promote this product tommorow morning……
[tomorrow] [to promote]
b. I had finished wrap up this candy two hours ago, so you can bring it to the
warehouse.[ to wrap up ]
c. Novi had written her job to makes some business plan, she must bring it to the director tommorow morning as soon
as possible.
[ to make ] after “to” so we use verb I
[tomorrow]
Maybe it's that I can recommend. So, don’t be afraid to make an error that we must try to repair it and in here we can study together. Thanks Miss, it’s very interesting…^^
For my friends, you can give comment
for me too. What do you agree with my correction?
Hi, Mey..
BalasHapusI think the sentence ...it's that I can recommend... is wrong. It can be more efficient if you change into "... that's all i can recommend.."
because after "can" , it must be V1.
Okay^^
ok tri, I also give you a corection about "i" you have to use "I"
BalasHapus