Senin, 20 April 2015
Thank you for my friends,your correction in my
Work#3 has made me know about my mistake.
1st Asmara Tampi and Abdel
Group 6 : I was
sleeping when my mother was cooking yesterday.
Correcittion : I was sleeping while my mother was cooking yesterday.
Correcittion : I was sleeping while my mother was cooking yesterday.
Irfan : I was
sleeping while my mother was cooking
yesterday.
2nd Iin Partinah
Group 6 :
Eka was dreaming about you last night.
Correction : I suggest this sentence should be
“Eka was dreaming about you when you
was
doing homework last night”.
Irfan : Your corrected is good,but
you must to use while,because after While is
Past
Continous.
3rd Tri
suharyanti
Irfan :
"... thank you to Miss Sri Utami that give me
opportunity.."
Correction : hi ,fan..
Your work has done well..
just simple comment from me, In your sentence :"... thank you to
Your work has done well..
just simple comment from me, In your sentence :"... thank you to
Miss Sri Utami that give me opportunity..", i think it should be :"...
thank you
to Miss Sri Utami that gives me opportunity.." because the subject is
singular.
Irfan : "... thank you to Miss Sri Utami that gives me opportunity.."
Thanks again for my friends,especially
for Asmara,Abdel,Iin,And Tri Suharyanti who have given me correction. :v
