Jumat, 03 April 2015
Good afternoon Miss Uut and all of my friends. I want to give some feedback and comments from our assignment on work#2. I'll give some opinions for some sentences which I think is incorrect. But before, I m sorry if I make some mistakes in my opinions.
Group 6:
1. I was sleeping when my mother was cooking yesterday.
Correct: I was sleeping while my mother was cooking yesterday.
Group 9:
1. Fauzy
had sent me a email before he called (no object) yesterday.
Correct: Fauzi had sent me an email
before he called me yesterday.
2. I known you after I had met with your
family.
Correct: I knew you after i had met your family.
Group 10:
1. Wait a minutes! she is writing a letter
for our director.
Correct: Wait a
minute! she is writing a letter for our director
2. This annual report is not complete, please check your
notes and say to me as soon as possible. I'm really need this document.
Correct: This annual report is not complete, please check your notes and say to
me as soon as possible. I really need this document.
3. Networking is very important for our organization,
so we have to have many relation with other company.
Correct: Networking
is very important for our organization, so we have to have many relations with other company.
4. This product was expired, you have to
saw the labels before you bought it.
Correct: This product was
expired, you have to see the label before you bought it. (after
“to”) (the product without “s” is singular)
5. I was recording supplies inventory while my partner
moved this car to the parking
area.
Correct: I was
recording supplies inventory while my partner is
moving this car to the parking area.
Correct after Maya's comment : I was recording supplies inventory while my partner was moving this car to the parking area.
Correct after Maya's comment : I was recording supplies inventory while my partner was moving this car to the parking area.
6. He was washing his car while his assistant cleaned his garden.
Correct: He was washing his car
while his assistant is
cleaning his garden.
Correct after Maya's comment : He was washing his car while his assistant was cleaning his garden.
Correct after Maya's comment : He was washing his car while his assistant was cleaning his garden.
7. Vitta was making
some cakes while her mother went to the market.
Correct: Vitta was making some cakes while her mother is going to
the market.
Correct after Maya's comment : Vitta was making some cakes while her mother was going to the market.
Correct after Maya's comment : Vitta was making some cakes while her mother was going to the market.
8. Novi had
written her job to makes some business plan, she must bring it to the director tommorow morning as soon as possible.
Correct: Novi had written her job to make some business plans, she must bring it to the director tommorow morning
as soon as possible.
Correct after Maya's comment Novi had written her job to make some business plans, she must bring it to the director tomorrow morning as soon as possible.
Correct after Maya's comment Novi had written her job to make some business plans, she must bring it to the director tomorrow morning as soon as possible.
9. The man had gone
from that company last year and now his sister apply
for the same job
with his position.
Correct: The man had gone from that company
last year and now his sister applies for the same job with his position.
hai asmara ;)
BalasHapusi want to give some comments :D
please look at again on number 5,6,7, and 8.
5. "...while my partner was moving..." not "is moving"
6. "...while his assistant was cleaning..." not "is cleaning"
7. "...while her mother was going..." not "is going"
8. tommorow should be "tomorrow"
I'm sorry if I have some mistakes :)
Thank You Maya for remind me. :)
Hapusyou're welcome ;)
BalasHapusAsmara I think I have to learn more with you, many mistake I do, because my English is too bad. I say many thanks for your comments. Also for maya, thanks for your comments:)
BalasHapusIt's okay, buddy :)
BalasHapus