Kamis, 02 April 2015
Good afternoon Miss Uut, after I read the work 2, I found
some gramatical errors based on my opinion.
First, I want to give comment for Group 6 post. They wrote :
1.
1. Eka was dreaming about you last night.
I suggest this
sentence shoul be “Eka was dreaming about you when you was doing homework last
night”.
Second, I found some gramatical errors on Group 9
post.
1. 1. I
bought many clothes to my family.
This sentence is not complete
for about adverb of time in the end of sentence.
This sentence should be “I
bought many clothes to my family yesterday”.
2.
2. Fauzy had sent me a email before he called yesterday.
The article “a” should be “an”
Fauzy
had sent me an email before
he called yesterday.
3. 3. I
known you after I had met
with your family.
This
sentence should be “I knew you after I had met with your family.
I’m sorry if I have a mistake.
Thank you
Thank you, Iin.
BalasHapus"...when you was doing homework ", do you think it is correct? (You + was) ?
May I answer the question Miss?
BalasHapusSure,Dyah. You may. :). Everyone may answer it.
Hapusthank you miss.. :)
BalasHapusI think that the sentence should be "...when you were doing homework" (you were, not "was")
but I think that iin's comment is incorrect, because she wrote :
BalasHapus"Eka was dreaming about you when you was doing homework last night”.
the sentence should be "Eka was dreaming about you while you were doing homework last night"
Yup. :)
HapusMiss, is this sentence " Eka was dreaming about you last night." surely wrong ?
HapusBecause i think it has been right.
hehe
i think this sentence:"...after I read the work 2, I found some gramatical errors based on my opinion." is wrong. The right is :"..after I had read the work 2, I found some gramatical errors based on my opinion."
BalasHapus