Minggu, 05 April 2015
good night miss, I'm sorry miss because I so late to doing work 3, because difficult connection in my vilage. Now, I want to give some feedback and comments from our assignment on work#2.
Group 9:
1.
F: Fauzy
had sent me a email before he called yesterday.
T: Fauzy had sent me an email before he called
yesterday.
Group 10:
1.
F: This annual report is not
complete, please check your notes and say to me as soon as possible. I'm
really need this document.
T : This annual report is not
complete, please check your notes and say to me as soon as possible. I
really need this document.
2.
F: The man had gone from that company
last year and now his sister apply for the same job
with his position.
T: The man had gone from that company
last year and now his sister applies for the same job
with his position.
thanks miss, I'm sorry if I make some mistakes in my opinions.
Hi, Nely..
BalasHapusI'm so gratefull with your opinion. But, there's gramatical error that you have done.
In this sentence:
....because I so late to doing work 3, because difficult connection in my vilage.
The right sentence is " because i'm so late to do work 3. I have difficulty to connect internet in my village.
Maybe that's my review. hehe
okey, thank you for your estimation.
BalasHapus