Minggu, 05 April 2015
Good night Miss Uut,
I’m sorry, I’m late to post my assigment cause something
problem with login my email. I can’t access writting project. Oke, now I’ll to try comment assigments from
my friends.
Firstly, I found any grammar is wrong in writting project A
Group 4 (http://writingprojectakta.blogspot.com/2015/03/group-4-work2.html)
“My friend
are helping me to solve my problem”
They should use to be “is” not “are”
Secondly, I found any grammar is wrong in writting project B
Group 9
“Fauzy had
sent me a email before he called yesterday”
They should
use article “an” not “a” = “ an email”
“I known you after I had
met with your family.”
They should use V2= “knew”
Group 10
“you have to
saw the labels before you bought it”
After “to”,we must use V1, “saw” we should be use “see”
“Don't go
anywhere! our office boy is making some glass of coffee for us”
they should
write “some glasses”
“Novi had written her job to makes some business plan,...”
After “to” = V infinitive
“He was washing his car while
his assistant cleaned his
garden.”
we should writte “He was washing his car while his assistant was
cleaning his garden."
