Minggu, 26 April 2015
Aburizal bakrie was born 15 November 1946. He is a
politician and widely recognised as one of the most successful bussinessman in Indonesia. From
2004 until 2005 he served as Indonesia’s Coordinating Minister for Economy.
From 2005 until 2009 he served as Coordinating
Minister for People Welfare. Since 2009 served as the Chairman of Golkar
Party until 2014. In 1972 Bakrie joined PT. Bakrie Bersaudara Tbk. Aburizal
Bakrie usually called ical. He is the one that is quite make a problem in
Sidoarjo, East Java. Lapindo mud case’s has not don’t untilright now. It become
a trouble when he intend to be a president.
Where as his name is quite popular in Indonesia. He also one
of the richest people in Indonesia. His worth around 50 bilion rupiah’s. In the
fall of 2010 media coverage started to indicate that Bakrie was seeking to
become the Golkar paty's presidential candidate in Indonesia’s Presiden
Election.Since then, Bakrie repeatedly expressed his desire to be nominated as
Golkar's presidential candidate. Media
reports also suggested the Golkar Party had already commenced its search for a running
mate to team up with Bakri.
fauzi akumau feedback, yang was born sebelum tanggal harus di tambahin "on"
BalasHapusterus baris ke 4, setelah 1972 lebih baik ditambah tanda koma
BalasHapusjadi seperti ini "In 1972, "
Fauzi, I’ll to try correction your work
BalasHapusAburizal “bakrie” ( You shoul write “Bakrie”) was born (you must use “ on “ before date) 15 November 1946. He is a politician and widely recognised as one of the most successful bussinessman in Indonesia. From 2004 until 2005 he served as Indonesia’s Coordinating Minister for Economy. From 2005 until 2009 he served as Coordinating Minister for People Welfare. Since 2009 served as the Chairman of Golkar Party until 2014. In 1972 ( I think you must to put Punctuation = Comma, after 1972) Bakrie joined PT. Bakrie Bersaudara Tbk. Aburizal Bakrie usually called ical ( I think you can write name with capital “Ical”. He is the one that is quite make a problem in Sidoarjo, East Java. Lapindo mud case’s “has not don’t” (Fauzi? Are you sure to use “has not don’t”) untilright now. It become a trouble when he intend to be a president.
Where as his name is quite popular in Indonesia. He also one of the richest people in Indonesia. His worth around 50 bilion rupiah’s. In the fall of 2010 media coverage started to indicate that Bakrie was seeking to become the Golkar “paty's” (you shoul write “party”) presidential candidate in Indonesia’s Presiden Election.Since then, Bakrie repeatedly expressed his desire to be nominated as Golkar's presidential candidate. Media reports also suggested the Golkar Party had already commenced its search for a running mate to team up with Bakri.
oh iyaa, kurang teliti,, makasih buat koreksinya
BalasHapusbisa ada has not don't , payah bner dah
BalasHapus