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Posted by : None Minggu, 26 April 2015

1. Present Continuous
a. We are starting promote this product tommorow morning in the Sun Hotel, so you can prepare everything right now.
Revised: We are starting promote this product tomorrow morning in the Sun Hotel, so you can prepare everything right now.

b. Wait a minutes! she is writing a letter for our director.
Revised: Wait a minute! she is writing a letter for our director.

c. Don't go anywhere! our office boy is making some glass of coffee for us.

2. Present Tense
a. This annual report is not complete, please check your notes and say to me as soon as possible. I'm really need this document.
Revised: This annual report is not complete, please check your notes and say to me as soon as possible. I really need this document.

b. Networking is very important for our organization, so we have to have many relation with other company.
Revised: Networking is very important for our organization, so we have to have many relations with other company.

c. She makes our annual report for presentation tonight.

3. Past tense
a. This product was expired, you have to saw the labels before you bought it.
Revised: This product was expired, you have to see the label before you bought it.

b. I delivered some order of fresh chickens to the Ayu's restaurant last morning.

c. His presentation was very excellent for young entrepreneur like him.

4. Past Continuous
a. I was recording supplies inventory while  my partner moved this car to the parking area.
Revised: I was recording supplies inventory while  my partner was moving a car to the parking area.

b. He was washing his car while his assistant cleaned his garden.
Revised: He was washing his car while his assistant was cleaning his garden.

c. Vitta was making some cakes while her mother went to the market.
Revised: Vitta was making some cakes while her mother was going to the market.

5. Past Perfect
a. I had finished wrap up this candy two hours ago, so you can bring it to the warehouse.

b. Novi had written her job to makes some business plan, she must bring it to the director tommorow morning as soon as possible.
Revised: Novi had written her job to make some business plans, she must bring it to the director tomorrow morning as soon as possible.

c. The man had gone from that company last year and now his sister apply for the same job with his position.
Revised:  The man had gone from that company last year and now his sister applies for the same job with his position.

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