Sabtu, 04 April 2015
Good night ,Miss Uut and Good Night, guys..
In this good opportunity, i post my third
assignment. Before, i had seen some works that had been done by my friends. I
had found some error in my friend’s works. But, it just depends on my own
think. So, maybe my comments are false, please give me feedback and i’ll be
gratefull to you.
These are my corrections :
From
7th group :
1. F:
I bought a new book on the market yesterday
R : I bought a new book in
the market yesterday
2. F
: Yuli was watching television when I cleaned the floor.
R : Yuli was watching
television while I was cleaning the floor.
3. F:
Last month I was dancing with my girlfriend when my brotherS came.
R: Last month I was
dancing with my girlfriend when my brothers came.
4. F:
I had played football after I exercised.
R: After I had played football , I
exercised or I exercised after i had
played football.
From
9th group :
1. F:
Fauzy had sent me a email before he called yesterday.
R: Fauzy had sent me an email
before he called yesterday.
2. F:
I known you after I had met with your family.
R: I knew you after I had
met with your family.
From
10th Group :
1. F:
This annual report is not complete, please check your notes and say to me as
soon as possible. I'm really need this document.
R: This annual report is not
complete, please check your notes and say to me as soon as possible. I really
need this document.
2. F:
Networking is very important for our organization, so we have to have many
relation with other company.
R: Networking is very important for
our organization, so we have to have many relations with other company.
3. F:
This product was expired, you have to saw the labels before you bought
it.
R: This product had expired, you
had to see the label before you bought it.
4. F:
I delivered some order of fresh chickens to the Ayu's restaurant
last morning.
R: I delivered some orders
of fresh chicken to the Ayu's restaurant last morning.
5. F:
I was recording supplies inventory while my partner moved this car
to the parking area
R: I was recording supplies
inventory when my partner moved this car to the parking area
6. F:
He was washing his car while his assistant cleaned his garden.
R: He was washing his car while his
assistant was cleaning his garden.
7. F:
Vitta was making some cakes while her mother went to the market.
R: Vitta was making some cakes
while her mother was going to the market.
8. F:
I had finished wrap up this candy two hours ago, so you can bring it to
the warehouse
R: I had wrapped up this
candy two hours ago, so you can bring it to the warehouse
9. F:
Novi had written her job to makes some business plan, she must bring it
to the director tommorow morning as soon as possible.
R: Novi had written her job to
make some business plans. She must bring it to the director tommorow morning
as soon as possible.
10. F:
The man had gone from that company last year and now his sister apply
for the same job with his position.
R: The man had gone from that
company last year and now his sister applies for the same job as
his position.
Actually i’m still in confusion about my correction
cause there are some sentence contexts that i don’t know exactly. But, i have
tried my best based on my brain.
So, once again, i need your review.
Thank you~
* F = False, R = right / correction
Dear Tri..thank you. Please tell me again your questions in the classroom so that we can discuss..oke?
BalasHapus