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Posted by : Unknown Rabu, 01 April 2015

Good evening Miss Uut. After I saw the work#3, I found the grammer is wrong in my opinion. following that I can find


PAST TENSE
Group 10
“you have to saw the labels before you bought it”
After “to”,we must use V1, “saw” we write “see
“You have to see the labels before you bought it”
Group 13
“We ate delicious snack and played some game last night”
We should change the word “game” into “games”.
“We ate delicious snack and played some games last night”

PAST CONTINOUS TENSE
Group 10
a. "I was recording supplies inventory while my partner moved this car to the parking area."
b. "He was washing his car while his assistant cleaned his garden."
c. "Vitta was making some cakes while her mother went to the market"
For all sentences, we must use “when” not “while”.
So, we can write
a. "I was recording supplies inventory when my partner moved this car to the parking area."
b. "He was washing his car when his assistant cleaned his garden."
c. "Vitta was making some cakes when her mother went to the market"

PAST PERFECT TENSE
Group 10
“Novi had written her job to makes some business plan, she must bring it to the director tomorrow morning as soon as possible”
The correct sentence is “she must brings it to the director”
“Novi had written her job to makes some business plan, she must brings it to the director tomorrow morning as soon as possible”

PRESENT TENSE
Group 10
“This annual report is not complete, please check your notes and say to me as soon as possible. I'm really need this document”
We should write “I really need this document”
“This annual report is not complete, please check your notes and say to me as soon as possible. I really need this document”

PRESENT CONTINOUS TENSE
Group 4
My friend are helping me to solve my problem”
The word “my friend” must use “is” not “are”
“My friend is helping me to solve my problem”
Group 9
“Fauzy had sent me a email before he called yesterday”
We should use “an” not "a" for “an email”
“Fauzy had sent me an email before he called yesterday”
Group 10
“Don't go anywhere! our office boy is making some glass of coffee for us”
We should write “some glasses
“Don't go anywhere! our office boy is making some glasses of coffee for us”
Group 13
“She was reading a novel with me in terrace when you come here”
The word “come” is for present tense, we must use "came"
We should write “She was reading a novel with me in terrace when you came here”
Group 13
“They are having dinner with my sister in the seafood restaurants at 7.30 p.m tonight”
We should write “restaurant”.
“They are having dinner with my sister in the seafood restaurant at 7.30 p.m tonight”

Thank you Miss :)

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  1. Dear Jihan, thanks.
    "He was washing his car when his assistant cleaned his garden.", the word "while" is better to use, and then the word "cleaned", it is supposed to be past continues because these two events (washing, and cleaning) were done at the same time in the past.

    BalasHapus
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    1. terimakasih masukannya Miss, karena maaf sebelumnya saya cuma melihat grammer dari rumusnya saja

      Hapus
  2. Hi, Ji..
    "After I saw the work#3, I found the grammer.."
    I think it isn't right yet. The right sentence is "After I had saen the work#3, I found the grammar.."

    BalasHapus

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