Minggu, 26 April 2015
SUDHAMEK
Hi friends, do you know who is he? I m sure some of you don't know him. That's why I will tell you who is the man above. The man above is Sudhamek. He is Garuda Food owner.
Sudhamek is a famous businessman. He was born on March, 20th 1956 in Rembang, Middle Java. Sudhamek is a conglomerate who born from aristicratic family. His family have had peanut processing industry which very famous. Sudhamek is the youngest child from eleven brothers, consist of seven boys and four women.
The surprise thing, eventhough he life with great wealth, but in the fact he prefer to look new challenge to build his own business. Sudhamek is a person who put education in the top of priority. He finished his study until bachelor. Not just to get the title in economic, but he has also finished bachelor of law in 1982 in Satya Wacana Salatiga University. That's why he has known many things, because from the beginning he has orientated that he have to be professional person with education, knowledge, and experience before he entered business world.
When Sudhamek finished his study in college, Sudhamek indirect entered to his father company PT Tudung Putra which was built in 1958. He pursued his first career in PT Gudang Garam Tbk during eight years. He as director president of PT Trias Santosa Tbk which is PT Gudang Garam subsidiary. Then, he as executive director of Djuhar Group in 1991 until 1994. At the same time,
Sudhamek was building a school which named Central Sevilla National Plus School and active in PT Posnesia Stainless Steel industry as vice precident. Finally on October 1994, he joined to his father company to become CEO of Garuda Food.
Since the company is headed by Sudhamek, the sales of the company were skyrocketed and reaching modern market in twenty four countries in the world. Besides that, he able to innovate and produces eighty kind of different producs. in 2014, he was ranked 35th richest person in Indonesia. his total wealth reached US$ 830 billion that year.
That's all I can tell you all. If I made any mistake I m sorry. Thank You.
Hello Asmara, I want to give you some feed back. I find some errors for your assignment. Do you agree with me? if you disagree with me, you can give me feed back again. OK?
BalasHapusHi friends, do you know who is he? I m ( I’m ) sure some of you don't know him. That's why I will tell you who is the man above. The man above is Sudhamek. He is Garuda Food owner.
Sudhamek is a famous businessman. He was born on March, 20th 1956 in Rembang, Middle Java. Sudhamek is a conglomerate who born from aristicratic family. His family have ( has ) had peanut processing industry which very famous. Sudhamek is the youngest child from eleven brothers, consist of seven boys and four women.
The surprise thing, eventhough he life ( lives ) with great wealth, but in the fact he prefer ( prefers ) to look new challenge to build his own business. Sudhamek is a person who put ( puts) education in the top of priority. He finished his study until bachelor. Not just to get the title in economic, but he has also ( also has ) finished bachelor of law in 1982 in Satya Wacana Salatiga University. That's why he has known many things, because from the beginning he has orientated that he have ( has ) to be professional person with education, knowledge, and experience before he entered business world.
When Sudhamek finished his study in college, Sudhamek indirect entered to his father company PT Tudung Putra which was built in 1958. He pursued his first career in PT Gudang Garam, Tbk during eight years. He as director president of PT Trias Santosa Tbk which is PT Gudang Garam subsidiary. Then, he as (an) executive director of Djuhar Group in 1991 until 1994. At the same time,
Sudhamek was building a school which named Central Sevilla National Plus School and active in PT Posnesia Stainless Steel industry as vice precident. Finally on October 1994, he joined to his father company to become CEO of Garuda Food.
Since the company is headed by Sudhamek, the sales of the company were skyrocketed and reaching modern market in twenty four countries in the world. Besides that, he able to innovate and produces ( produce ) after to=v1 eighty kind of different producs. in 2014, he was ranked 35th ( the ) richest person in Indonesia. his (His) total wealth reached US$ 830 billion that year.
That's all I can tell you all. If I made any mistake ( , ) I m (I’m) sorry. Thank You.
Hi, Tam. Firstly, I agree with Mey's correction. So, here I just want to add about your correction.
BalasHapusHere they are :
- F : That's why I will tell you who is the man above.
R : That's why I will tell you who the man above (is).
- F : Sudhamek indirect entered to his father company PT Tudung Putra which was built in 1958
R : Sudhamek (indirectly) entered to his father company PT Tudung Putra which was built in 1958
- F : He as director president of PT Trias Santosa Tbk which is PT Gudang Garam subsidiary. Then, he as (an) executive director of Djuhar Group in 1991 until 1994
R : He (was) as (a) director president of PT Trias Santosa Tbk which is PT Gudang Garam subsidiary. Then, he (was) as (an) executive director of Djuhar Group in 1991 until 1994
- F : a school which named Central Sevilla National Plus School
R : a school which (was) named Central Sevilla National Plus School
- F : as vice precident
R : as (a) vice precident
- F : Since the company is headed by Sudhamek, the sales of the company were skyrocketed and reaching modern market in twenty four countries in the world.
R : Since the company (was) headed by Sudhamek, the sales of the company were skyrocketed and (reached) modern market in twenty four countries in the world.
Are they right ? :D
Thank you Meyliani for your comment, those very useful for me, but I'm disagree from some of your comment like as you suggest me "life" should be "lives", I mean my sentence not "tinggal" but "hidup" I'm sorry I use Indonesia, Ijust want to you know,, hehe..
BalasHapusand then you suggest "he has also finished" should be "he also has finished" I think that's incorrect, but I don't know..
Please correct my work :D
HapusAsmara, I think that "Middle Java" should be "Central Java" :D
BalasHapusAnd then,
1. "Sudhamek is a conglomerate who born from aristicratic family."
Correction : "Sudhamek is a conglomerate who was born from aristicratic family."
2. "His family have had peanut processing industry which very famous."
Correction : "His family have had peanut processing industry which is very famous."
3. "I m sorry."
Correction : "I'm sorry."
Tri Suharyanti : I had corrected your work, just see :)
BalasHapusDyah Damayanti: thank you maya for remind me..
BalasHapus