Sabtu, 25 April 2015
R. Budi Hartono
Robert
Budi Hartono or whose real name Oei Hwie Tjhong , ( born in Semarang , 28 April
1940 ; age 74 years ) is an Indonesian businessman . He was the second son of
the founder of the company Djarum Oei Wie Gwan . Robert is a Chinese -
Indonesian descent . His older brother named Michael Bambang Hartono alias Hwie
Oei Siang . Total wealth Robert in 2012 were recorded by Forbes at US $ 6.5
billion, placing it as the 146th richest person in the world and the richest
one in Indonesia.
Besides
Djarum , Robert and Michael is the largest shareholder in Bank Central Asia (
BCA ) . They both through Farindo Holding Ltd. controls 51 % stake in BCA . In
addition , they also have oil palm plantations covering 65,000 hectares in West
Kalimantan since 2008 , as well as a number of property owners among them Grand
Indonesia and electronics companies. One of the Djarum Group businesses in this
sector moves under the banner Polytron which has operating for more than 30
years . Polytron company is now also producing phones that were previously only
producing air conditioning, refrigerator , video and audio products , and
dispensers . Through the newly created company namely Ventures Global Digital
Prima , they also bought Kaskus , Indonesia's most popular sites.
Robert
Budi Hartono married a woman named Widowati Hartono or more familiar with the
name Giok Hartono . With him, the owner of PT Djarum has three sons, all of whom have
completed education. They are Victor Hartono , Martin Hartono , and Armand
Hartono . Robert very fond of badminton
which stems from hobby and PB Djarum founded in 1969. One of the badminton
players who came from PB Djarum is Liem Swie King , which is known by the
nickname " King Smash " .
please give some feedback.
Hii Abdel, I will try to give you feedback about your work.
BalasHapusYour second sentence on the last paragraph "With him" should be "With her" because in the previous sentence you talk about Robert Budi Hartono marriage with a woman named Widowati Hartono. So, the sentence should be " With her, the owner of PT Djarum has three sons, all of whom have completed education."
Thank you :)
Hello Abdel, I want to give some feed back for you. I find some errors in your assignment. And I would like to repair it. Let's see.
BalasHapusTotal wealth Robert in 2012 ( were ) recorded by Forbes………
“were” should be was
Through the newly created company namely Ventures Global Digital Prima , they also bought Kaskus , ( Indonesia's most popular sites) should be the most popular of Indonesia sites
Robert very fond of badminton which stems from ( hobbyists ) and PB Djarum founded in 1969……
Abdel, I want to know what do you mean with “ hobbyists”? because I don’t find it in a dictionary.
Do you agree with me? If you disagree, you can give me feed back again. OK!
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HapusIn paragraph 3. "all of whom" must be "all of them". Just it
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BalasHapusI'm sorry, I will give more feedback.
BalasHapus- He “was” the second son of the founder…Are you sure? :D…. you must using “is” because Robert Budi Hartono is always be son Oei Wie Gwan.
- With “him”, the owner of PT Djarum has three sons,,,,maybe the correct pronoun is “her”,,,
-… badminton players who “came” from PB Djarum.. (maybe better is “come”)
- which is “known” by the nickname ( because is fact you must write “ know”
I'm sorry if I have a mistakes. :v if you are not agree you can give me feedback too.