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Revised Work#2

Posted by : Unknown Kamis, 23 April 2015

Good Morning Miss,
In this post, there are improvements tenses that have been given by my friends at work#3 for Group 7. I'am very gratefull to my friends. There are improvements tenses that I found:



F: I can’t go to party because I am studiting now.
T: I can’t go to the party because I am studiting now.

F: I bought a new book on the market yesterday.
R : I bought a new book in the market yesterday.

F : Yuli was watching television  when I cleaned the floor.
R : Yuli was watching television  while I  was cleaning the floor.

F: Last month I was dancing with my girlfriend when my brotherS came.
R: Last month I was dancing with my girlfriend when my brothers came.

F: I had played football after I exercised.
R: After I had played football , I exercised or I exercised after I had played footbal.

Thank you miss and thanks to my friends.

 



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