Minggu, 26 April 2015
Hi everyone.
My name is Abdurrohman Hafid. I am a simple man who is still in effort to make all of my dreams comes true. I have a lot of dreams. When I was kid, I want to be a teacher, but as time goes by, I have other dreams. They are depend on my mind about situation around me. When I look some ill people, I want to be a doctor. When, I look government in television, I want to be a politican. However, I have grown up. Now, I know what I want to be.
At this moment, I almost finish my study in Semarang State University (State University of Semarang). After I graduate, I will continue my study in other place. During this time, I will find job to spend my free time. And I can improve my experiences from this job. Many jobs I can do : teaching, accounting, and other job. And then, after I have graduated this study I will, go home and start for business and develop what has been done by my father. With my parent, I will also enter in society, and will grown up my society.
This is my dreams. I hope this is come true.
Hello Abdur, I’ll to try give you some suggestion on your work
BalasHapusWhen, I look government in television, I want to be a politic(I think you must to use “politican” thats mean seorang politik, but when you use “politic” thats mean lembaga politik). However, I have grown up. Now, I know what I want to be.
And then, after I have graduated this study(you can put punctuation “comma” before “I will go....”) I will go home and start for business and develop what has been done by my father.
Okay Yulia, Thanks for your correction.
HapusThat's can make me better.