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- REVISED WORK 2
Posted by : Unknown
Minggu, 26 April 2015
Good Night Miss Uut. Good Night Friends. I would like
to post the revise of our group's work on work 2. Thanks for everyone that have
given feedback about the grammatical error and all of our group's mistakes.
1. Last month I was dancing with my girlfriend when my
brotherS came.
# Last
month I was dancing with my girlfriend when my brothers came.
2. She usually gets up at 04:00 a.m
# She
usually gets up at 04:00 a.m.
3. I can't go to party because I am studying now.
# I can't go
to the party because I am studying now
4. She is Listening to music.
# She is listening
to music.
5. I had played football after I exercised.
# I played football
after I have exercised.
This is my work. Thank for your attention.