Selasa, 31 Maret 2015
Good evening Miss and good evening friends :)
Well, in this nice occasion, I would like to give some
comments as my assignment. But, I realize that my group’s post is not perfect
too. So, I hope that all of you will give your comments for my group’s post.
First, I find some error grammaticals on Group 9’s post.
They wrote :
1. Fauzy had sent me a email before he called yesterday.
The
article “a” should be “an”.
2. I known
you after I had met with your family.
This
sentence should be “I knew you after I had met with your family”.
Second, I want to give some comments for Group 10. They wrote :
1. Vitta
was making some cakes while her mother went to the market.
This
sentence should be “Vitta was making some cakes while her mother was going to
the market”.
2. He
was washing his car while his assistant cleaned his garden.
This
sentence should be “He was washing his car while his assistant was cleaning his
garden."
3. I
was recording supplies inventory while my partner moved this car to the parking
area.
This
sentence should be “I was recording supplies inventory while my partner was
moving this
car to the parking area."
4. Novi
had written her job to makes some business plan,...
This
sentence should be “Novi had written her job to make some business plan,...”.
Third, I want
to give comment for Group 6. They wrote :
1. I was sleeping when my mother was cooking
yesterday.
This
sentence should be “I was sleeping while my mother was cooking yesterday.”
Good job, Dyah.
BalasHapus"some business plan", what's missing? can you guess?
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BalasHapusI'm sorry Miss..I didn't realize it when I was seeing that post :)
BalasHapus"some business plan" should be "some business plans"
Am I right miss?
BalasHapus